Writing number 01
Name : moises grovas alcca
Course: Intermediate 11
My friend Angelica and I know since two weeks ago. We have some similarities and some differences.
I'm creative, and so is angelica, because I saw how she come with ideas faster than another partners, we both like to relax with a few close friends, also I don’t like to go to discos, neither does she, because we both prefer to stay at home with friends or with our families. I think very carefully about what I say, so she does, for example when we talk we a friend or with a nice girl.
On the other hand, we have some differences for example, I like to play video games especially adventure games, but angelica doesn’t. Another thing is that I don’t like to cook, because I think is a hard work, but she does. However I enjoy talking with stranger people for example, when I am online, but angelica is very carefully bout it.
Finally, I think that with our similarities and differences we could be very good friends.
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Check and correct please:
know since two weeks ago,
she come, another partners, we talk we a friend.
Proper nouns use capital letters always, ia a hard work, talking with stranger people,
Grade: 1+
My friend Angelica and I know us since two weeks ago. We have some similarities and some differences.
I'm creative, and so is angelica, because I saw how she comes with ideas faster than other partners, we both like to relax with a few close friends, also I don’t like to go to discos, neither does she, because we both prefer to stay at home with friends or with our families. I think very carefully about what I say, so she does, for example when we talk to a friend or with a nice girl.
On the other hand, we have some differences for example, I like to play video games especially adventure games, but Angelica doesn’t. Another thing is that I don’t like to cook, because I think it’s a hard work, but she does. However I enjoy talking with strange people for example, when I am online, but angelica is very carefully bout it.
Finally, I think that with our similarities and differences we could be very good friends.
Still need to correct some kistakes, check the first paragrph and proper nouns.
Final Grade= 1
1.-my friend angelica and i met two weeks ago.
2.-she has better ideas than others.
3.-us talk with friends
4.-because i think it is very diffcult,
5.-i enjoy talking to strange people.
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