miércoles, 10 de septiembre de 2008

essay I11

I have a strong friendship with Diego and Juan. I met them at high school. We are very close each other but Diego and Juan have differences in their personalities and likes, even though they have some things in common.

One similarity is that they are smart and give me good advices when I’m in a difficult situation. Both of my friends are outgoing, because they enjoy going to parties and make friends. Another thing my friends have in common is that both are amusing, because they make me laugh so loud when they tell me jokes.

One important difference is that Diego is very messy; however Juan is very organized and takes care of his image. Juan loves to spend his time in the computer and playing online games; in contrast Diego develops an exercise regimen and likes to play soccer. Diego is an absentminded guy because sometimes he forgets his appointments with us, on the other hand Juan always chronicle his appointments in his cell phone, in this way he can’t forget anything.

In conclusion both are very important for me because their personalities are different in this way I can spend my time making different activities with them. That is the main reason because we are friends.
Luis Villegas - I11

4 comentarios:

icpnablogs dijo...

Check and correct please:
at, very close each other, advices, both are amusing,agreement of verbs, he chronicle his appointments???, punctuation,
do you all spend together only "your" time?

icpnablogs dijo...

GRade 1+

Unknown dijo...

In, very close friends, a good advice, both are amused, he chronicles his appointments, we spent our time making different activities.

icpnablogs dijo...

Very good
Final Grade: 2