martes, 9 de septiembre de 2008

*ESSAY - Intermediate 11

My friends Armando and Deborah are my best friends. I've known them since last year.
They have a lot of similarities and just few differences.

Armando is an outgoing person and so is Deborah. They both like to spend time with friends. Another thing They have in common is that they are responsable.Both of my friends like to go to the nightclubs.

However They have some differences for example Armando never accepts when he is wrong, He thinks that he always has the reason. In contrast to him, Deborah isn't like him because if Deborah is wrong or has a mistake, she accepts it and try to do it better.On the other hand Deborah likes to listen punk music and Armando doesn't like it.

Althougt they have many similarities and differences, they are very important for me. I like them a lot and I'm sure they like me. We'll be friend for ever. =)

3 comentarios:

icpnablogs dijo...

Check:
Responsable,punctuation, he has the reasong(is not English is an Spanish translation)
try,listen punk, be friend, for ever.
Grade 1+

Anónimo dijo...

My friends Armando and Deborah are my best friends. I've known them since last year.
They have a lot of similarities and just few differences.

Armando is an outgoing person and so is Deborah. They both like to spend time with friends. Another thing they have in common is that they are responsible. Both of my friends like to go to the nightclubs.

However they have some differences for example Armando never accepts when he is wrong, he thinks that he is always right. In contrast to him, Deborah isn't like him because if Deborah is wrong or has a mistake, she accepts it and tries to do it better. On the other hand Deborah likes heavy metal and Armando doesn't like it.

Although they have many similarities and differences, they are very important for me. I like them a lot and I'm sure they like me. We'll be friends forever.

icpnablogs dijo...

excellent work
Final grade: 2