miércoles, 10 de septiembre de 2008

ESSAY INTERMEDIATE 11

My two friends are Nico and Luis, they are my neighbors. I knew them when I moved to my new house fourteen years ago. Both of my friends have a few similarities and some differences.

Luis likes to play video games and so does Nico. Both are studying in the university and not to mention the fact that we live in the same neighborhood.

However, they have some differences. For example, Luis is very outgoing but Nico is not. On the other hand, Nico is more responsible than Luis and Nico likes to spend time with his girlfriend. In constrast Luis likes to spend time with his friends.

Since we have known each other, we are very close friends. We share our experiences, goals and sadness. Maybe we do not have some similarities but we have an amazing friendship.


SERGIO VASQUEZ

2 comentarios:

icpnablogs dijo...

Check the following please:
neighbors,punctuation,

Check your introduction paragraph: you mentioned: to have a lot of similarities, but in your conclusion you wrote: we do not have some similarities...
Which one is it?

Grade: 1+

icpnablogs dijo...

Final Grade = 1