Denisse Vega Q.
Intermediate 11
My friends are Rosaluz and Karen. I have known each other since we are at school. They have a lot of similarities and just a few differences.
One similarity is Rosaluz and Karen are hardworking. For example, they work every day in the morning. Both of my friends usually get along well with everybody. For example, they like to be with a groups of people. One thing my friends have in common is to be responsible. For example, they give their homework and are at work on time. And also both of my friends are good listeners.
One important difference is for example, my friend Rosaluz is friendly but Karen is not it. In contrast to Rosaluz likes to wear fashion clothes. Karen likes to wear casual clothes. On the other hand, Karen likes to spend time with her friends but Rosaluz likes to spend time with her family.
In conclusion, I think my friends are good and truthful people. They are good advisers to me .We will be together forever.
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Paragrpahs which need to be revised:
First: subjects and semtence fragments
Second paragraph: that, give vs. return
Thid paragraph: it, needs a subject.
conclusion: to me? Will you?
GRADE 1+
just check and correct these words and phrases please.
Check and correct again please:
I have known each other
since we are at
one similiarity is Rosaluz and....
a groups of people
Karen is not it
In contrast to Rosaluz likes to
Final grade 1
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