My friend Diana and I have known each other for 6 years, we have a lot of similarities and just a few differences.
I´m sistematic and so is Diana. We both like to spend time with friends and we like to go shopping.
I like to dance and just likes she do. When we both want to relax, we see a video movie in my bedroom or in her house. specially we like to see comedy movie. We like it.
And we also think similarly because, I think when someone has a problem or felling bad, it´s better travel to another department for relax and so do she.
However we have some differences for example i´m introspective but Diana isn´t. In contrast to me Diana enjoy talking with people, even strangers. She likes to meet people of different places. On the other hand she likes to listen salsa and pop music whereas i enjoy listen hard rock or rock music.
I like Diana a lot and i´m sure she likes me, and we´ll be friends for ever because, she is truthful friend and she´s a good listener and the most important she´s a good advicer.
Judith Zuñiga P. I11
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Grade 1-
- She likes to dance and just like i do.
- we both like to see a comedy movie.
-when someone feel depressed.
-it´s better to travel to another deparment to relax, she also thinks it.
- Diana enjoys talking with people, even strangers.
- She likes to listen sals music.
-I like to listen hard rock music.
- We´ll be friends forever.
- She is a reliable friend.
judith zuñiga
still needs some correction
Final grade: 1
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